Just One Thing

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Feb 11, 2008


Just one thing
before you go
all this time
i have to know
what you think
of days that passed
just one thing
i have to ask
where i stand?
and where i fall?
but speak quick
and please don't stall
cause when you do
i'll know what you feel
and whats not true at all
cause i feel lost
but at the same time found
like i am falling
but still feel the ground
its not a dream
so i won't wake up
another poem bout life and love
and i have many left to do
just one thing i have to ask
but i will leave that up to you

please comment, good and bad thanks

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    WOW!! I really loved this poem, and I mean REALLY! very well written! Deff. adding you to my fav. poet list. Keep it up 5/5. P.S. I'd love it if you read soem of my poems (preferibly my newest one "you're on my mind" please comment/rate. thansk so much!)
    Rachel

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow! that's so wonderful!!!! it really is 1 of ur best!!!! it's flawless! it flows perfectly and makes my heart skip beats! 99999999999/5!!!
    :P
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I liked this one, but i agree with wilted. beginning was amazing, and the ending got a little iffy! sorry...i love ur other stuff tho!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    So the beginning was really good, very well written and well thought out. the flow was great. But towards the middle/end the flow started getting a bit rocky. but besides that. great write. :] 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by mollymoo

    So amazing...it was very lovely!
    you have outstanding talent..
    keep writing so i can keep reading (=

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