I love the first sentence "White mist whips around me". The title was the perfect choice for this poem, and the ending was cool. Nice Job!

Wow! this was so beauitful. you have a great talent. this poem was quite pure and heartfelt. wonderful write. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is very beautifully written. I love the imagery, especially the first two lines, and I love the last line as well. The only thing that I don't understand is when you said, "I allow my anger to rise" or something like that. Maybe I have to read it a few more times to really understand, but overall it is a very good poem! I look forward to reading more of your stuff. You seem to have a very interesting mind, which I like :)

I really like this poem, but I do have at least one suggestion for you.
In all of the A lines, you had something or an action, and in the B you had something that made sense with it and started with 'I' I loved that, it reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago...except it wasn't 'I' it was something else.
Anyway, one of the lines is 'no one can know my burden' or something like that, I feel this broke your rhythm and such. Otherwise, you had a lot of nice touches.
The imagery is amazing, and that's what really makes a poem.
The last line is a nice culmination and adds reason and purpose to rest of the poem.
A great write!