Past

Great poem!! 5/5

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. The flow was great and the feeling was just perfect. I love the way you wrote this poem. Great job! 5/5

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An excellent poem. the flow was flawless and your message really gets across to the reader.
"Bye my past that haunts me today
Bye my lost ones that turned my sky gray
Bye to the frowns that lingered on my face
Bye to my empty heart full of space"
my favorite stanza.
-and i also like the last two lines of the second stanza and the very last line of the poem. :] a very enjoyable read. 5/5.

It was a kind of dark, yet kind way to remember the past. nice job the flow was well and the 2nd paragraph was my favorite!!
5/5 !props!

I loved the way how you expressed mixed emotions of loneliness and anger...readers will definitely can relate as the words you used are easy to comprehend..

i liked the lazt stanza even if one line didnt rhyme...it touched me like "im forgetting my past and i have no future"...dont lose faith..everythin happens for areason and always find away to move forward...goodluck...5/5