This poem is very exciting and heart touching to me your really good. send me a PM and we can talk about our poems. I wrote some more poems and submitted them so read if you would like.

Good way of looking at fallen in love....

does it make your heart pump when ever you think of them?put on a random smile without any reason?

those lines are truly what i felt when i fell in love my first true love his name still gives me a rush and a smile