Beautiful poem deep and true

"Its time to be a big girl and big girls don't cry
So without a tear, here's my sweetest goodbye"

i liked these two lines most

you live once in this world so cheer up and enjoy this life
look for your happiness

Wow thats soo good! i can really relate to it! excelent job! flows wonderfully too! i really really like the last stanza, great job!

A very beautiful write. the emotions were intense and this piece was very deep. And it really got to me, because I know exactly what this feels like, and reading this made me heart ease. And I teared up. just. .simply an oh-my-gosh amazing and excellent write. 5/5!

This is a good poem, but that's not absolutely true, about big girls not crying. That's just my theory. This poem has a lot of good wording in it. The flow and feeling fit just right. Great job!

.:CiNdY:.

Thats right stand your ground and stay strong sweetheart

Beautiful poem you are really talented :d

keep up the good work

xx

This is very good...Sad but with conviction...good job...5/5....xoxoxo

Great poem!

This is so beautiful. keep your head up, hun. btw, that pic (if it is u, on ur profile) is absolutely gorgeous. just so you know. :P anywho, this is a beautiful poem.

Wow this was so good i liked it a lot it was amazing lol 5/5

Wow. powerful. 5/5

Liked your verse, it was delicate yet very forward

This is a poem thats well expressed and yet spendid in its own way. keep writing.

I really like this one...its really emotional...im tryin to learn how to write my poems like this..

Can u comment on all of mines nd tell me what u think nd what i should do to make it better? Thnkx!

Beautiful write... like d way u hv expressed ur feelings...

impressive n heartfelt...

I like this poem because it has a backbone. It's not weepy like so many others lamenting the loss of love, some of mine included. It has that kiss off air to it that motivates. 5/5

This poem is a nice little piece. The rhymes were indeed good besides the ones in the second stanza. The choosing of words fitted the meaning, and the flow was good. This poem's subject is one many can relate you. A good job indeed, keep rhyming 5/5

I liked it, at some points I felt that I might anticipate your next line, yet you used something unexpected (nice). Thoughts of you lingers seemed odd though. I liked the flow of the poem, esp the part with the cig.

I know that's right girl!!!!! I can did this poem and I defiently feel this one. Dang right big girls don't cry, well not in front of the guy anyway. love how you said he wanted someone you could never be, oh well, don't ever change to accommodate a dude. Never. Well done and keep up the excellent work!!!!!!

Prodigious in amazement is your poetry. :) I enjoyed reading this, and I cordially say you are without a doubt heading for a tremendous career (if you ever wanted to go into writing). :) 5/5. Stupefying. Breathtaking. I like adjectives - they also create a well-written poem of very high quality, although they are like red peppers, you can't have too many; it does not always fit with big words. :)