Hey i havent checked your poems out in a while!

I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,
i FORGET WHY I RESISTED HER, WELL TONIGHT SHE IS MINE.

that was my favourite line - i LOVED this poem, so dark but just really provokative, it was a great read and makes a change. i loved the imagery, it was really dark. 5/5

Ginnie xxx

I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,

^ My favourite line :)

I think you should write the whole story of this as an epic poem! I would definitely read it!

The lexis is brilliant, but sometimes the rhythm gets lost - some lines are a bit too long in comparison to the others in that stanza.

Also, thanks very much for your comment on my poem! Xxx

I love it ! i like the darkness to it.
and i especially liked how u culd
split it into 2
xx