Deep Dark Secret.

by sexyCheckers   Feb 11, 2008


We have a dog,
It doesn't make us whole,
We have a roof,
That doesn't make a home.
We have each other,
But we're all alone,
They think we're fine,
But they don't know.

We have a car,
A garden, A tree,
We have everything,
So why are we lonely?

We have the same last name,
But we act like strangers,
We live in a neighbourhood watch,
But we live in danger.

We say we don't hurt,
Love is something that's earnt.
Maybe we don't deserve it,
Yeah fine, Love ain't sh it.

Keeping strong,
With the roof over our heads,
The food in our fridge,
The doona's on our beds.

But We're So Fcuking Alone.

But They Don't Know.

So Can You Keep Our,

Deep Dark Secret.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fabz

    True True.. Poem is really good!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Wow that was very good i liked the first stanza and the way u started it, its very unique
    and different. the poem was well worded and structured
    great job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    LOVE IT!! ITS SO TRUE! GREAT WORK
    ANOTHER AMAZIN ONE OF YOUR POEMS!
    KEEP WRITING! 5/5
    THANX 4 COMMENTIN MINE 2:)
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Really good poem. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Alan

    This was really good, it really sounds like you write directly from the heart... not dressing up anything too much, and that's admirable! 5/5 Keep writing and your freed desires will help fulfill your dreams!

    Cheers,
    Richard