Emotionless Departure

by Shinobi   Feb 11, 2008


An endless river of blood is flowing underneath
Cut veins are the source for this terrible pain
A sad story of a heart dead down beneath
A tale of a being who had nothing to gain

Nor human nor monster, but something between
He walked through his personal living hell
A creature none before was ever seen
A dead spirit inside a human shell

Feelings were dead inside of him
Heart of any sort was nowhere to be found
He lived his entire life as it seems
Without any emotion, without making a sound

Emotions of pain and loss appeared every day
A life full of misery and ache
Finally he had found his way astray
And decided life was too much to take

He took a knife, with the sharpest blade
And with a swift move stuck it above his hand
"The first cut is always the deepest" he said
"Now let me die, turn me into sand"

Bloody letters arranged on the dirty floor
As his corpse was laying against the wall
"Emotionless I left as I came,
No one to love, this is my fall"

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw, its clear to me that you got the talent to be good poet ,i love this poem and you write it it in amazing way and i love the flow an the rhyme its realy good well done 5/5 and i feel its so sad and dark.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this poem was absolutely, incredibly amazing. It showed so much emotion, that kinda freaked me out. Anyway, the flow was great. I can't point out any flaws in this poem. It shows so much emotion. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was such a sad poem, but you made it work. It was a very good poem, full of emotion and everything. I absolutely loved it.

    When I got to the end, I almost went, "aww." cause it was so sad. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    This poem is pure brilliance - the emotion and the descriptions are awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    An endless river of blood is flowing underneath
    Cut veins are the source for this terrible pain
    A sad story of a heart dead down beneath
    A tale of a being who had nothing to gain
    --wow,amazing,gave me alot of great imagery!
    definetly 5/5
    keep writen

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