by viraz vitalia Feb 11, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears fall more than ever |
Pretty good. ur flow could still use some work, but it's starting to get better. keep writing. you've got the emotion part of writing down. now u just have to polish it. or...as a certain band director we all know and love (hehe) says "put the icing on the cake" =^^= |