I guess you konw i would really love this one
its like looking back in time. every week i say i would quit and i really meant it and fri.
would come and you know the rest of that story this went on for 17 years it went by
so fast. and i'm glad my family never left
my wife did try to hook up with one of her
co workers and he shot her down i ghuess i got lucky there thats what welcome to the darkside is about and betrayed two of my older poems. anyway like i said i so glad
they never left. your poem is one of your best so far. this site really is doing alot of good for alot of people myself included

Strong poem clear and to the point, frustration is obvious and the message clear.