I am...

by Niinaa   Feb 12, 2008


I am the tear rolling down your cheek
I am what falls when you're depressed and weak

I am the pain
that constantly drives you insane

I am the fear
that will always be near

I am the word suicide
that wanders your mind

I am the lie,
that made you say goodbye

I am the friend,
who made our friendship end,

I am the feeling of being alone,
that tries so hard not to be shown

I am the feeling of being so miserable,
the one that makes you feel that you are invisible

I am the girl who's missing your smile,
and thinks about you more than just once and a while,

I am the one who believes miracles aren't real,
and nothing can change how you really feel

I am the feeling of dreaded hate,
this is how i really feel this is my fate.

By---Carolina

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katy

    Very good poem!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, beautiful poem. i can really relate. and it flow great! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    This is a very unique poem, the flow is a lil' off but some of my poems are like that lol. like it though 4\5 nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    I love this one
    like the way you put it together, starting every part with 'i am... ' simple structure but it works! &methaphors you us are unique
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    The poem reminds me of a song. I thought the idea was good, but the flow was off. Some of the rhymes didn't work that well. Try using some more descriptive words. I liked your use of metaphores though.

    Cayce xx