by Niinaa Feb 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I am the tear rolling down your cheek |
by Katy
Very good poem!! 5/5 |
Wow, beautiful poem. i can really relate. and it flow great! 5/5 |
This is a very unique poem, the flow is a lil' off but some of my poems are like that lol. like it though 4\5 nice job! |
by Lizaveta
I love this one |
The poem reminds me of a song. I thought the idea was good, but the flow was off. Some of the rhymes didn't work that well. Try using some more descriptive words. I liked your use of metaphores though. |