Done

by Morgan   Feb 12, 2008


Woke up with everything
Changed my whole life
Got rearranged
Reality had become the past
I should have known it wouldn't last
You were my everything
I only wish I could've seen this coming
My heart got shattered
Nothing truly mattered
I fought through the pain
But nothing became the same
You built me up
Then tore me down
With your love to be never found
I didn't know what to do
But with a miracle I got over you
Months have passed
But my love will last
We had some fun
But now I'm done.

((One of my best friends wrote that, and he's not very confident with his work at all. I think he's an amazing poet. But we'd like ur guys' opinions also. So please let us know what you think))

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  • 16 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Nice job. My first ones were alot werse.
    just keep writing and your soul will bleed the rest.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Your friend is really very talented, this is a great poem. Especially like the way it ends, brings a sense of hope that now this person can move on and be happy again.

    Hope this boosts your confidence =)

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very Impressing poem, I think your friend did a good job by just starting off. And hell ya he has a talent ready to burst! Keep up the good work! 5/5.

    -Sarah A.

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