Very Impressing poem, I think your friend did a good job by just starting off. And hell ya he has a talent ready to burst! Keep up the good work! 5/5.

-Sarah A.

Your friend is really very talented, this is a great poem. Especially like the way it ends, brings a sense of hope that now this person can move on and be happy again.

Hope this boosts your confidence =)

Em xXx

Nice job. My first ones were alot werse.
just keep writing and your soul will bleed the rest.