Wow...
I am truly speechless. This is simply amazing from the first to the last line. Beginning is excellent, it pulled me straight into this piece and your brilliant descriptions kept my attention through every greatly written stanza. The imagery that you created is creative and very vivid. The repetition of the beginning lines in the end is truly effective. Flow of the whole piece is flawless despite the long stanzas.
I like your choice of words. You expressed emotions excellently and I can relate to this piece in a way which makes it even more powerful for me. Remarkable write.
I truly can't express how much I enjoyed while I was reading this.
Keep writing, you have a way with words.
5/5 from me, but you surely deserve more.

This poem is excellent and it has a brilliant chioce of wording ^_^
Great job your a talented writter =]
5/5