I like this one..

Hiya, Is this a histric poem or how you feel now. Being opressed on a daily basis and by your local community must be terrible. I guess feelings of isolation, frustrations and of course anger.
Good work.

Michael

I really like this. it makes people think about who they should live there lives and not let anyone live it for them. and also i shows that beging nice to someone pays off you i hope that everything goes out for you well talk to you later i am at school bye bye

This is an Amazing poem and I hate rasism so much with a passion !!! I always cry whenever I hear things like that !! I'm soo sorry