I like the repetition of the title in the poem. Once again a pattern could make this poem stronger. The feeling of hating that person and the indignation is very evident with your words, but the structure of the overall poem could be improved. For example all your stanzas had 4 lines, but the last one had 5. I'm giving this a 4/5. nice poem, but I'm trying to give you constructive critism to help you improve. |
by Mello193
Oooh I like ut....she's a ho....you rock! Nice poem! |