Excellent poem....flow was perfect....and i really like the rhyme scheme you used....

in the second stanza..you need to change the spelling of realize..but other than that it was flawless.5/5

Oh em gee. This piece was absolutely amazing. My favorite poem of yours so far that i've read. .reading the first stnaza got me hooked! lol. A very sad, but emotional piece. Everything was so. .intense. And the first and third stanza were my favorite. :] 5/5.