by DepthofPassion Feb 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I am not sure how I feel about this. I know it needs some improvements but I wrote it for someone and those who know me know that I do not normally do the " love thing" so I really think this poem/prose turned out poorly. Give me your honest opinion. Thanks and I appreciate it immensely. |
by elena
Your poem was very descriptive and i thoroughly enjoyed it. It had alot of imagery |