Good poem.
I do have some things that i think need fixing.
"remember the my memories"
should be
"remember the memories"

and

"then i said why did i gave up for what,"
should be
"why did i give it up, for what?"

and

"use don't want me at all,"
should be
"you don't want me at all"

just some thoughts. it would make the poem sound better.
4/5

Thanks for telling me u can help me if u want