I really like the idea of "faithless faith" and especially love the lines:

"These burnt memories
Make unrelenting desires."

Some clever rhyming here too, and unfortunately, a lot of what this poem is all about is true! Nice write, 5/5

Em xXx

Yeah, there is seriously something wrong with our world.
I view the world, as in your poem.
I had a problem with this line
"Such faithless faith"
it kind of contradicted itself. mainly because faith, cannot be faithless.

otherwise, the poem was very strong with emotion, and explaining all the wrongs in the world. the flow was excellent.
5/5

Good, this is what poetry should be! I liked the flow and the faithless faith part....it was well written, too!

1) your poems are not pointless!
2)
Our imaginary love
With those phony allies.
Your rigid embraces
My unbearable sighs.

my favorite part. this is how i felt right before i broke up with my boyfriend. and the faithless faith? i live with that faith. great job, dear. but you are right, it needs a bang at the end.....

Great write! I've enjoyed every bit of it. But it says, "*UNFINISHED*" at the bottom. Hmm... I think if it gets longer.. it might lose some of it. :P

Very well written and unfortunately true. 5/5

Beautifully penned ... love the way you have structured the poem and it flowed beautifully...

"Walking seperate paths
Make untruthful friends.
Their unwise decisions
Equal broken amends."
^^ we have be so careful while making friends... trust is one thing that is broken so easily... wonderful lines...

"Our imaginary love
With those phony allies.
Your rigid embraces
My unbearable sighs."

^^ loved this stanza ... quite touching :)

beautiful write..

I like it so far

Wow i must say that you really put lots of your thoughts into writing this poem.I love each and evry stanza of it. you put in such a way that poetrical( idk if tt word exist) yeat in a logical manner.Btw it seems to look finished for me

Excellent Job
5/5 from me