My life is moving on, and dreams are coming true
Wishing that I could share them*all with you*
Your on my mind like you always are
So I will wish upon that shiny little star
*Hoping that you too are thinking of me where ever you are*

I changed some things up in the last thing.. i think that i flows better, but i freaking love this poem! you did such a fatabulous job on it! wonderful work! great flow *except for the last stanza.. little iffy* wonderful word choice and rhyme as well! keep up the great work! :]

Thank you so much for your kind comments, and I will take your advice and change up the words on that one. Thanks alot. I really do appreciate it.

5/5 I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM...I HAVE A POEM TITLED...WHEN I WISH UPON A STAR..BUT ITS REALLY LONG AND I DONT FEEL LIKE SUBMITTING IT RIGHT NOW MAYBE TOMORROW OR SOME OTHER TIME..BUT HEY GD JOB!!!

Thanks so much for your input. Please vote on it if you would. I love it when I get a vote. :o) I will also look at your poems.

Thanks so much. It would be nice if you voted on it down below? I will return the favor as well.

Thank you for your comments on my poems :), I particularly like this one of yours. Thr rhythm is great!

Thank you very much.. I appreciate it.