by X Kashies Misery X Feb 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Looking at those pictures and thinking of those days, |
by Kimberley
WOW! *tear*. i can relate to that poem in so many ways (but my mom noy dad). its like you took the words right out of my mind. i love it!!! i love the emotion in it and how you say the 'remember" thing in like the ummm 7th para. i liked it alot. im like crying!!! love it. 10/5 |
by mvep
Goog job keep up way to go |
by Fan Angeleo
Long and emotional poem, I know this is no ordinary poem here either, you wrote from your heart and that is beautiful. Keep it up. |
Dis wus an amazing poem. I loveed it. I would dedicatee it to mii moms tho. |
by Stephanie
It's lengthy, but it's totally worth the read. The first lines immediately drew me in and you kept my attention the whole way through. The flow was flawless, and the emotions were intense. Beautiful job. :) Overall: 5.5 |