Comments : It's Over.......

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    OH MY GOD.....

    i realllly liked that poem, it was soo deep and meaningful....I can fully understand how you feel...that's how I feel 2....

    You have realll talent,

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy loves Jesus

    I gotta say.. those are some pertty sweet lyrics :)
    I enjoyed reading it all the way through :)
    5/5 amazing job!

  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Im thinking that this isnt really a poem...more like a song...and its amazing!
    Strong words with a lot of emotion!!! Great!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    It's lengthy, but it's totally worth the read. The first lines immediately drew me in and you kept my attention the whole way through. The flow was flawless, and the emotions were intense. Beautiful job. :) Overall: 5.5

    - Stephanie <33

    [Thanks for the comment on my poem. :) It means a lot to me.]

  • 16 years ago

    by DatHoodBarbiieKristen

    Dis wus an amazing poem. I loveed it. I would dedicatee it to mii moms tho.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Long and emotional poem, I know this is no ordinary poem here either, you wrote from your heart and that is beautiful. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by mvep

    Goog job keep up way to go

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    WOW! *tear*. i can relate to that poem in so many ways (but my mom noy dad). its like you took the words right out of my mind. i love it!!! i love the emotion in it and how you say the 'remember" thing in like the ummm 7th para. i liked it alot. im like crying!!! love it. 10/5
    ~KM~