by Richard Alan Feb 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
He was the kid that laughed aloud, |
Wow that was great! Great job! |
by Hidden1
I like how you use the "in crowd" and him being a people pleaser to cover up his many insecurities and the "inner fight" that he has. You did really well in making this a visual. Overall this is a well written poem and I like the flow of it. Keep up the good work. |