Again you have wrote one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I admit the format was kind of awkward, but it didn't matter in this case. The concept of this poem was just simply beautiful. I loved it. Again you have proved that you're one magnificent poet. Keep up the great work!

Letty

Thanks letty,
as always it is nice hearing from you.
the format is just a concept that i chosed to be that way, because in my opinion it slow down the reading speed, it is just how i see it myself.
thank you again, it is great seeing you again here in this great community of P&Q

Awww. You started writing again for your "future wife". That's so sweet. I agree with Letty, the format was really awkward, but It you read it with out all of those spaces it flows really well. I like the rhymes, they felt natural and not forced. Overall this was a great poem!

Keep writing!
Cayce

This is such a sweet write. :] I'm glad to see you are back. The flow in this was pretty good, and you worded some things very originally and nicely in this. I loved this part most;
'Tonight,
I went to every street of
The love land
Collecting all the words
For a new write.'
I like the metaphor you used here. Well done. :]

Tammie

"I am writing her
To say
Happy Valentines Day
This year is
The most important valentines of my life
Because
I have the love of my future wife."
This is my favorite stanza cuz it has so much meaning in it. Its good to have you back and writing poems. I realy enjoyed readint it. dast xosh.

Hey mr. poet,
welcome back
I wrote you privite message three times but no response from you?
I love this poem, I like the style. it is amazing

A really cute feel-good poem. I thought the structure was a little awkward too but after reading it through a second time it makes more sense and keeps the words nice and simple. I like the idea of the bird with a broken wing aswell.

Em xXx

Saweeet<3

Awww it was so adorable i loved it! neither of us have written lately lol, i think i forgot to put on a couple of my poems. i know i have one more to put on, but i just haven't been into writing, i'm pretty braindead i guess. writer's block has been upon me for a very long time unfortunately. hope everything is going well, get back to me when you get the chance!

Aww, this is amazing. Your're such a great poet. I could hear the poet's voice throughout the whole poem. Brillant writing. 5/5

Sweer poem. I liked it. I wish that I cloud have had a nice v-day. Anyways nice formate great word choice. 5/5

AMAZING!

Very romantic I peally like your style