Why fight

by Lance   Feb 13, 2008


You're sitting there upon you're bed,
thoughts are racing through your head.
you're thinking hard about this knife,
should you plunge or keep you're life.
you plunge it deep, your flesh goes numb.
your mind a haze, your time has come.
you fade away into your night,
to enter your eternal flight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by bill

    Love it!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Good flow

  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    The emotions expressed in great choice of words leaves me speechless.. This is such a powerful write and the imagination in this piece is captivating.. Very intense and eloquent images potrayed and I am awed by the creativity of the words combined in this poem...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Cool!! man I like rhyming lol and that was short and sweet and to the point! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Wowwy you're really good

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