Comments : Be Careful What u Wish 4 [Because u just might get it all]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    So far so good babe ! maybe a title name could be "wanting more" its just a suggestion ! 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great work sista!!!! This is wonderful! I love the rhyming and the flow of the poem. Also the repetition of the first and last bit really went with this. Great work! hang in there sweetie.. i know you can get through this, and im here to help you do just that. :]

    ILY!!!!!!!
    your big sis *f-o-r-e-v-e-r .&. a-l-w-a-y-s*
    Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by IMissYou

    Love this poem it's really sweet..x

  • 16 years ago

    by MEMI

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  • 16 years ago

    by Freckles

    You were the mountain I was willing to climb

    lovee it! i can so relate to it! :(
    keep it up xx