Aww omg this is so cute i like it a lot!! The flow and portrayal of emotion are both just amazing. And unfortunatly i can relate which makes it that much more enjoyable to read. :) Great job!!!
~*Whit*~

Thanks alot i appricient that... yeee it sucks ejj!!! when you pass from that phase in life!!
hope you will feel better ....

Zvetty

I liked it alot, i could feel a connection to the poem that i don't fel to many. keep it up i look forward to reading more of your stuff

*james*

This poem is really good.=) nice job