Comments : We'll Make It

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is basically about my current, I guess you could say, boyfriend. He's my ex but only because I was forced to break up with him. And my parents have went to the ends of the Earth, pretty much, to keep us apart. All we ever did was kiss at school...nothing else and this was last year. Ever since, I've been told I can't even talk to him. I didn't listen to my parents because I'm in love with him...so, I got my car taken away that I've only had for a couple of weeks, my cell phone I no longer have, and to top it all off...if my mom hears about me saying one word to him, she says that she's getting a restraining order. On the plus side, my grandma agrees with me. Anyways, that's where the poem came from. Give me some feed back guys-I'd like to hear from ya!!!
    L8tr!
    ~K@y/@~

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Angel

    Great job on the poem. that shows how you feel. it really gets to me b/c i was am kind of am in the same predicament. great job, keep writing.