A borkeing friend ship

by peaunt   Feb 13, 2008


Friends and their for u when u need them in time of pain
They love u in times of need when u have no one to hold one to
u need that shoulder to cry on
But have you ever had a friend who does not care about u when u need them the most.
or who is mean too u and acts like their Ur friend well i have it sucks

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Um well in a poem you should not use "U" for the word "you". Also, this is not written like a poem. It doesn't have to ryme, but triple check the flow. One out of five.

  • 16 years ago

    by erin girl

    Hey i like the concept of your poem, The only thing i could say to help you is to change the flow. It was a little choppy. Utilize your puncuation marks when needed, and also spell out the words. Instead of u, say you.
    Other than that it was good!:]
    *E

  • 16 years ago

    by peaunt

    Hey

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