I look to see the stars above,
even those wont last.
Nothing seems to last forever,
it'll all be over fast.
Stars who fall towards the earth,
never to come near:
Oh they are the object of
hopes, and dreams, and fear.
They make everything seem small,
if you do compare.
But not this feeling that I've got;
so new, so gentle, so fair.
Weird to see that what I've learn,
have been to such a great concern.
What is biggest here in life,
isn't where our goals may strife.
It's not the endless skies above,
it is simply earthly love...
Your flow was amazing. One line connects with the other. I loved this poem because there was a variety of points made. Beautiful words that meant so much. Great job
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