The flow is really awkward.

When i look into your eyes
[Capitalize I]
i cant help but notice
[Capitalize I and cant should be can't]
your many lies
you promised me alot
[A lot is two words]
but i lost you to
[^^Capitalize I]
meth and pot
want to help you out
but you wont listen or let me in
[^^Wont should be won't]
my patience is running thin
let me help you
let me bring you back
i hate seeing you run around
[^^Capitalize I]
out in the world telling
me your doing good and your happy
[^^This was an awkward line, and both your's should be you're]
but thats changed
[^^That should be that's]
you said its too late death is your only fate
[^^Its should be it's]
theres always ways you know
[^^Theres should be there's]
come back to the better days
you come and go
but theres one thing about you
[^^Theres is there's]
that i know you do want my help
[^^Capitalize I]
your screaming inside but outside
[^^Your should be you're]
you pretend and hide

Sorry for all the grammar correction, but they will make the poem better.

Keep writing!
Cayce

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