by Sirrah Feb 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
He painted love |
You ended this piece beautifully. great write. 5/5. |
by hadia
The ending is so sad, but its my favorite part of the poem. |
by rene
Incredible, the world is filled with such sadness and you captured it all, but there are beautiful things in the world to, and in your poem you speak of them to, just incredible. keep it up |
Good Job, Keep it up!!! |
by Alexa Eudis
Wow that is really really really good! i like it a lot! very nice job |