Ahmad u never fail to impress me.. ALWAYS!!
this is very heart felt and deep.. u know that everything's only gonna get better from here now.. as for the poem i loved the flow, ur almost effortless rhyming.. thought provoking also like this " And calling you through silence till my throat bleeds""
ALSO ur last para was a killer ending!!
GREAT JOB!!

"Now all that's left for me
Are pictures to view, Are notes to read
Are sleepless nights and blind dreams
And calling you through silence till my throat bleeds"

^That was absolutly my favorite stanza-love it-love it-love it

Thus poem was really deep and feeled with so much heartache.I could really tell you put your own emotions into this.Great job.The only thing I saw that bothered me was the 1st line on the last staza.It threw me off a little but other then that-awesome job.5/5

<3Amber

Ful of heartache, sadness and sincerity. The only thing I dislike about this poem is that you have to feel this way. Some really nice rhyme and great flow. 5/5

Em xXx

I loved this poem , it's sad to read because i can relate to it alot actually and that scares me a little but i liked it.

Aww!! :[ Great poem, even though it was sad. I loved your use of words. The flow was a little off but eh I think it's fine just the way it is. I liked it :]]

Cayce xx

Aww wow...this poem really made me feel not so lonely you know. I mean we share the same emotion on this day and it's cool knowing someone out there feels the same. This is a lovely poem portrayed with true emotion. I am adding it to my fave poems. Thanks for the inspiration
5/5
kaila

Awsome now thats feeling...... sadness sweeps over me when i read it great i give it 5/5

Awesome poem! :D

Awesome poem! :D

I really enjoyed reading your poem it's very good i could feel the words as i was reading it............ x x x tc
please do read and comment on some of my poems

I loved everything about this poem it made so much sence to me..wow you have a really good tallent for writting and it could take you some where some day.
-kortney-