Goodbye! </3

by Christina   Feb 14, 2008


I give up on trying
to make you happy
to make you love me
so lets give up

I do everything you want
just to make you happy
and when you tell me to stop
I stop

I know I shouldn't do that
I know that it is wrong
but for some reason
you have me wrapped around your finger

I wake up in the morning
to get ready for another day
another day of pleasing you
and making YOU happy

I don't know why I need to
please you and your wants
I guess it's because I don't
want you to let me go

but I've realized now
your not the one
because if you were
you wouldn't treat me this way

I'm moving on
and I think you should to
I know we will love each other
till the day we die
but we wont die together

(ok ik its rele bad. i found it in like a note book that i had from 6th and 7th grade. but i decided to put it on here because its still my work! and not everything i write is going to be 100% great)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    I agree not 100% but still emotion filled and a great piece that could inspire, i know my work from when i was in grade six wasn't good lol----nice job, tara

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem, you have some errors though.

    I think it would be better if you wrote this in the past tense. Coz I think you were trying to tell a story in the poem.

    I might be wrong - so it's up to you if you want to change it.

    Anyway it was a fantastic poem - you wrote this when you were at 6-7th grade. To be honest I can't write when I was that young. So you really have the potential you improve. Never stop writing! :)

    5/5 from me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    It wasn't bad you liar! lol It was a decent poem... the flow was alright and the word choice was decent. :P loved it!

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