Like the words you used, good poem

You're poem is really great.

First of all great title, it is grabbed my attention.

You expressed emotions on a fantastic way in whole first stanza, bravo, I enjoyed in it very much, you pulled me right in this piece. Very elegantly written, with the touch of sadness.

I don't like second line of second stanza cause, this is just my opinion, somehow it threw me off the rhythm of entire piece, but anyway every description is vivid.

Third stanza wasn't my favorite, it didn't impressed me too much cause I think that it would be more effective with stronger wording.

And last stanza is truly amazing, every line is filled with such power, superbly done!

Very well written. Emotional and tragic angles made it quite touchy.

I like this poem, it expresses your pain clearly i hope you are happier now

I thought this poem was really good, i can someway relate to it, because i experience the same felelings and sometimes i dont know why or cant explain what causes me to feel this way...i love poems i can relate to. Good job

This poem was beautiful. a wonderful piece of work. very hearfelt, seemed alittle sad also. but all and all i loved it.

Feeling of loss
Consume an empty soul
Wandering aimlessly down lonely roads
Living in the dark no light in sight

that was my favorite stanza. it was also a perfect opening. very pure and very deep. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is well penned and executed. You did justice to your title Sherry cause that's what you described profoundly in this piece. I always like this thing about you Sherry that your poems invite the reader to live your words and to feel it hence. That's what Im left with uptil the end.
You are among my best writers and will always be as your words touch my soul always.

Feeling of loss
Consume an empty soul
Wandering aimlessly down lonely roads
Living in the dark no light in sight

^^

Deep and intense. Your beginnings are always fabulous and so is this. You display such deep and raw emotions in here specifying how depression and despair is- The journey of it and the sufferings behind.

Gloom and despair overtake
Happiness disappeared
Searching for life
Instead death consumes

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This verse revolves round despair and speaks how when depression and negativity overtakes, positivity and optimism seems blur and eventually it disappears. this state is worse and a person gets numb sometimes and I like the way you depict the ultimate feelings here.

Anger and hatred now reside
Joy is merely a memory
Never again to be seen
No longer the desire to live

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The journey is continued, the sadness prevails. Its so true that when anger and hatred stays, it closes all the roads to joy and makes one live without an aim or desire. Wonderful verse to speak volumes on this topic. I don't know what was irrelevant here..

Tear drops fall night after night
Thoughts of escaping hell
Torture a demented mind
Sorrow has become the future doom

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This is a sorrowful end, with a wish to search for a glimpse of happiness, sometimes we end up being disheartened and gifted loads of darkness to live with.

Excellent flow, excellent word usage and most importantly excellent emotions' portrayal.
Keep writing(:
Awesome piece(: