Wow!

Crying out for you,
the one that can't hear my calls

^^^^ this line is what struck me. I can really relate to what your feeling. It hurts so much when the only way the person you care about notices you is when you're in agony. But I digress. This poem was simply amazing. I could feel the emotion just by reading it. you have a lot of talent. keep writing and goodl luck to you. 5/5
kat