I love you are the words I really want to say.

by desiring love   Feb 14, 2008


A notion of agony suppresses the fading hope, concaved throughout my mind.

It becomes permeable to ever confide in a brighter tomorrow or ever smile.

Solitary concludes my fate, as each word confined by your lips.

Are trammeled in complete confusion, distinguished by the verity of your lies.

It's inconclusive as we engage into one another's eyes,

A silent language is spoken but our self-contained emotions continue to lurk throughout our desoluted souls.

Never a word is sought, only condemned 4-ever in our minds.

Fear pertaining us both, Love saturated, indulged in every beat our hearts partake.

I love you are the words that I so relunctantly attempt to say.

Yet I stumble, and can't continue without losing my breathe. Opening my mouth but nothing escaping except regret.

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  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Wonderful poem, has a deep meaning and very expressive. good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    I know how much pain and hurt you must have felt while writing this.... at the same time the way you were able to express yourself is great. I'm so sorry you had to go through this. After having lost him writing about it was the only thing that seemed to help. I hope you find your writing to be a way of relief for you as well. keep writing 5/5
    kat

  • 16 years ago

    by Jemma

    Thsi was perfect except for the '4-ever'. why you would write such an incredible poem and then use abbreviations liek that is beyond me. The poem has great depth and meaning and such an emotive tone and it really is incredible.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jahieda

    Tell him you love him and go N-E-X-T

  • 16 years ago

    by K R ii S T ii N A

    Good, Good
    Keep Iit Up
    X - - x