Oh my... this was absolutely beautiful! :] It made me smile. The flow was flawless, and the emotions were so sweet & cute. Also, I really like the repetition of "Of" - it added a little something extra to the poem. Beautiful job. Overall: 5.5

-- Steph.

This is so sweet, something that I can really relate to. Especially:

Of all the tears that I cry,
None of them are from pain.

Very cute and the flow was awesome. Loving the repetition aswell. Shows how much you love him =)

5/5

Em xXx

I loved this style! It just flowed so flawlessly and had me hooked from beginning to end. The emotions were easy to relate with and the images you described were easy to picture in my mind. Well done *5/5*

Excellent poem.The way you formed it made it kinda hard for me to read.If you broke it into stanzas it would be a lot smoother for the readers.But other than that this was a excellent read.Flow was pretty good and the emotion was dep.5/5

<3Amber

This have to be one of the most beautiful love poems I've read by far because it was from the heart, and any love poem writing from the heart is a great one in my book, but either way it was written very well and about a very awesome topic. The one u lov3, Great job...n happy valentines day

Aww beautiful poem to read on valentines day. Makes me wish I wasn't single right now haha. Great work this poem had great flow and a TONS of emotion lovely job.
5/5
kaila

I really enjoyed the flow to this. You picked words that flowed nicely instead of fancy words like most people. And it really did a good job on this poem. Great write 5/5