Alone (Cinquain)

by Michelle18   Feb 14, 2008


Alone,
No one is near.
Cut my wrist so slowly,
Because no one is here....im so...
Alone

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Cinquain poem - 5 line stanza,first line is the title, second line describes the title,third line describes actions,fourth line describes feelings,and the fifth line refers back to the title....

this is my first try at this type of poem..its nowhere near perfect but let me know what you think. thanx.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is sad. I use to have this habit. I know it seems like it helps but really it's so much better to get away. If you ever need a hand im here. But the pem was phenomenal great work.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautifully done! The style was one I have never read before so it was refreshing and an interesting read. The emotions were strong and you words were full with meaning. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Dino Dhamphyr

    Wow this is my first time reading a poem in this form. I guess u learn something new everyday,... anyways I think it was pretty decent for ur first try,I can't really critique it because this form is new to me, the only advice I could give u is keep trying and you'll reach perfection, I think i would want to give it a shot...

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Babyboo thats was good

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Clever rhyme and effective use of the pause. I'm useless at writing these types of poem so I'm in awe of anyone who can! Practice makes perfect =)

    Em xXx

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