I love this form! I truly do. I'm going to try it tonight. Haha.

The poem was amazing. The emotions were intense, and your word choice was amazing. Spectacular job. :] Overall: 5.5

- Steph.

Clever rhyme and effective use of the pause. I'm useless at writing these types of poem so I'm in awe of anyone who can! Practice makes perfect =)

Em xXx

Babyboo thats was good

Wow this is my first time reading a poem in this form. I guess u learn something new everyday,... anyways I think it was pretty decent for ur first try,I can't really critique it because this form is new to me, the only advice I could give u is keep trying and you'll reach perfection, I think i would want to give it a shot...

Beautifully done! The style was one I have never read before so it was refreshing and an interesting read. The emotions were strong and you words were full with meaning. Well done *5/5*

This is sad. I use to have this habit. I know it seems like it helps but really it's so much better to get away. If you ever need a hand im here. But the pem was phenomenal great work.
5/5