Driving me Insane

by El   Feb 14, 2008


I lay here, broken, on the floor
Cuts on my wrists, cant take any more
Too much pain, too many tears
Caused by ones I hold so dear

Tear tracks on my face are glistening
I'm screaming for help, but you're not listening
I'm starting to feel so shut out
I can't live with you but can't live without

So many things running through my mind
Some good, some bad, both entwined
I'm not sure how I'm supposed to feel
Everything is just too surreal

That was just another failed attempt
To put an end to this misery and pain
But I'm still here, tortured and suffering
And living's driving me insane

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    =( That's sad,
    but really well written
    I love it, it's great
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Woah!!! this poem is quite confronting but it is very very strong and full of feeling.
    Very well done!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Faye

    I know how you feel.
    Good visual.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    For me , i say , pay no attention to the critics for this poem , i can feel the pain , and the hurt,. and you writen it , with all heart and feelings , and i can reach those feelings,
    in your words,

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    That was so amazing...keep up the great work. this poem was so excellent

    5/5

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