by katie T Scott Feb 14, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Imagine a world in a test tube, |
ROCK ON! This is very good. Very deep! The only thing I would say is to be careful with rhyme schemes. In most of these you made it work-but it's supposed to look effortless (which it mostly was) but in some lines it wasn't. Awesome though! |