by I Heart Question Mark Feb 14, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I decided today that your love for me is true |
by erin girl
This is simple and cute. Valentines day is a way to express your emotion, and you did just that. I like how you gave this poem a way of hope for the readers, like when you love someone they might just love you back when your not expecting it. I think maybe you should organize it a little better though. Put a little bit more emotion in it and make it a little more deep. Other than that i loved it! |