Comments : Valentine's Day

  • 16 years ago

    by erin girl

    This is simple and cute. Valentines day is a way to express your emotion, and you did just that. I like how you gave this poem a way of hope for the readers, like when you love someone they might just love you back when your not expecting it. I think maybe you should organize it a little better though. Put a little bit more emotion in it and make it a little more deep. Other than that i loved it!

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