Valentine's Day

by Gasttlee   Feb 14, 2008


Cupid's arrow
tears the fabric of hate.

Awe
sees everywhere.

Connection
sticks as glue.

Love
wings in the air.

A hug
bares hope.

Cuddly kisses
spring sunshine.

Valentines
voice love
and love stands
as spring flowers.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    I saw a lot of synechdoche (literary term) in this poem...the abrupt, yet flowing rhythm was nice, and from what I've seen, a switch up from your usual style. I liked it :D

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This was really short but it was really cute though, i really liked this one alot =] you did a good job at this even though it wasn't to much to write you know but still great.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gasttlee
    What a wonderful piece.

    Valentines
    voice love
    and love stands
    as spring flowers.

    I really loved these lines. You did a great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    This is different. Cute, and unique. Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Simple and sweet. Especially loving the last stanza. Interesting structure that worked really well. 5/5

    Em xXx

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