Simple and sweet. Especially loving the last stanza. Interesting structure that worked really well. 5/5

Em xXx

This is different. Cute, and unique. Great job

Gasttlee
What a wonderful piece.

Valentines
voice love
and love stands
as spring flowers.

I really loved these lines. You did a great job!
Take Care Cindy

This was really short but it was really cute though, i really liked this one alot =] you did a good job at this even though it wasn't to much to write you know but still great.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I saw a lot of synechdoche (literary term) in this poem...the abrupt, yet flowing rhythm was nice, and from what I've seen, a switch up from your usual style. I liked it :D