All Is Lost

by Greg Beam   Feb 14, 2008


All is lost and now it seems.
That you no longer care for me.
We could've made it if we tried.
I guess I wasn't worth the fight.
Our love was pure, our love was great.
You chose to throw it all away.
I tried so hard but couldn't win.
My hearts been broken once again.
Why could no one let us be?
They watched us like a referee.
I wish there was a way to show.
I'm holding on won't let you go.
I'm here for you until the end.
I hope we still can be best friends.
You are my world, you changed my life.
I still want you to be my wife.
And no one else can have my heart.
It's yours until death due us part.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nice poem, I'm sure that alot of people can relate to this poem in one way or another. It has a nice flow and good word choice. Also you used some nice rhyming. I give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    A good poem, it had a nice flow and good emotions but the flow wasnt on the whole way. And I dont know why you have full stops at the end of each line it makes it seem as if you're starting over again line after line. A nice poem but it didnt have that wow factor so I give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. very beautifully written. the flow only broke in 2 spots. but besides that, this piece was amazing. :] I can feel the intensity of your emotions. :] great write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    I think you did a great job on this one (even tho I believe it was a tough one for ya). Good Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    ....breathtaking--amazing how i can relate minus ill be the wife. How i still hold on and its been a year. This poem is so heartfelt and pure...great job!

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