So sweet and sad. Great rhyming that didn't feel at all forced.

"I wish there was a way to show.
I'm holding on won't let you go."

My favourite lines, just really sweet and sincere. Love the ending aswell. I know I'm nit-picking but it's "death do us part." =)

Beautiful write,

5/5

Em xXx

....breathtaking--amazing how i can relate minus ill be the wife. How i still hold on and its been a year. This poem is so heartfelt and pure...great job!

I think you did a great job on this one (even tho I believe it was a tough one for ya). Good Job!

Awe. very beautifully written. the flow only broke in 2 spots. but besides that, this piece was amazing. :] I can feel the intensity of your emotions. :] great write. 5/5

A good poem, it had a nice flow and good emotions but the flow wasnt on the whole way. And I dont know why you have full stops at the end of each line it makes it seem as if you're starting over again line after line. A nice poem but it didnt have that wow factor so I give it a 4/5

Nice poem, I'm sure that alot of people can relate to this poem in one way or another. It has a nice flow and good word choice. Also you used some nice rhyming. I give it a 5/5