Imaginary

by Lemma   Feb 14, 2008


Though we're miles apart
I still remember clearly
The way my heart beats fast
Whenever you are near me.

That glint in your eye
That freckle on your ear
That way you hold me close
And take away my fear

The way you take my hand in yours
And brush my hair from my face
The tenderness of your touch and
Comfort of your embrace.

Soon I will come back to you
To be together once again
This is just our chapter
Where there falls a little rain.

The taste of your kiss
The warmth of your skin
The beat of your heart
That is hidden within.

That smile on your face
That flick in your hair
Don't worry honey
Soon I'll be there.

But for this little while
Like a pixie or fairy
Your touch and your kiss
Are imaginary.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great poem! I love the concept to this poem, it's really deep. The flow was decent and the word choice was good. Overall its a great poem and deserves a 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah20

    Sweet poem. It's apparent that you really care about whoever this poem is for. I thought the poem itself was pretty good. The flow was decent and the rhymes weren't bad, however nothing really pushed this poem past "sweet."

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwww.. this poem is so adorable... very descriptive and full of love... *sighs* i love it.

    it flowed nicely and i loved the way you ended it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Emilline

    Omg this is so good! very cute, the ending was great too! i can really relate to this! excelent job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Very sweet.
    "This is just our chapter
    Where there falls a little rain." <---amazing lines